- Non-Erotic Poetry
- with rattling pill bottles
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Click herewith rattling pill bottles
Mortality follows me
music for a fool's funeral parade
a macabre Mardi Gras
dancing on the Eve of Sacrifice
the children have turned down other streets
into strangers grown
with secret lives unkown
punch in punch out
punched unconscious by a myriad mundanities
waking up old
I turn to you for comfort
in the torture of our love
- COMMENTS
MarionsLoverover 5 years agoAuthorthanks for reading!
true, the meter is off
I was hoping for dramatic emphasis
greenmountaineerover 5 years agoVery somber but well crafted. I have mixed feelings about "myriad mundanities" and actually think the poem is stronger without line 10.
