All Comments on 'Without My Answer'

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HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 months ago

It's so hard to chat with a cock in your mouth

As your tongue works its' wonderful magic

But you were born to serve, so you continue to suck

Till he cums. You don't. That's quite tragic.

Tail_GunnerTail_Gunnerabout 2 months ago

Another 5-Star effort! ... I look forward to your poetry submission!

... AND -- thanks for the 'follow' ! ...

Take Care, Stay Safe

Levi

42Below42Belowabout 2 months ago

Nice end rhymes, especially strong in the last two verses. Given the topic you could argue that it is an internal-end rhyme scheme if there were such a thing -well apparently in this poem there is. I also note there are some rather tricky ‘slant’ rhymes or half rhymes to start things off. But isn’t that equally what a hand job is? Not that I’m one to let a woman play with mine but I think I’ve just been ‘rhymed.’

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Listening to the grass grow and to the squirrel's heartbeat, I aim to be gentle, obedient, sweet, caring, kind and pleasing, but I can be silly and cheeky (spank me sensible). Please be interesting, different and charming. Stretch my mind. When engaging with others. this ...