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by demure101
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Desejoalmost 12 years agoI like this very much
The hyphen in the first line confuses me, but overall I like the idea, the language and the rhythm of this piece.
DawnJalmost 12 years agoWow!
I love this poem about awakenings! My favorite stanza is the last one, and my favorite line has to be this one: "felt/as if some sleeping grief had gone away."
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoPeace
very nice, needs (some) slight revisions to get that killer flow. Don't know about stars but this deserves a big happy face.
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