All Comments on 'Wounds'

Sad ode to unspoken thoughts and unfulfilled desires. The choice of words gives this work a lovely, wistful spin.

This is an exquisite depiction of the wide spectrum of feelings that make up a sensitive heart. The underpinning of sadness at the human condition, the unabashed expression of love for One, the tenderness of the realtionship, all so concisely put forward. "Wounds" moves the reader.

just to know that a man can express himself in this way restores my hopes for mankind ;) a beautiful, honest poem

"What I feel I cannot say"

Your feelings have spoken to me, and as I observe from other comments, they have spoken to others as well.

As always, your sensitive use of words is strikingly effective.

Simple, yet so powerful. The words so common, the idea so uncommon! Brilliantly conceived, beautifully crafted.