All Comments on 'Wyndham Gaol in Wyndham Towne'

Aside from some possible spelling errors, I loved the way this poem read, and the force behind it. Strong.

Very powerful. I found the middle of this poem to be quite absorbing. The fact that I actually read it all (and it is long) does say something. It was engrossing enough to hold my attention.

...fine offering I've read from you today. This, though having some very powerful moments, did not have for me the consistent strength displayed in your other 2 poems, but was a wonderful read nonetheless.

...works wonders here. Thank you for making us aware of things that are often silenced, overlooked, or dismissed.

...reminds me of a piece of jazz, improvising, repeated phrases and quotes from all over the place and through it all a picture appears.

I loved this.

As this poem grew I felt it become more intense, more personal. Very nice work, jd. Thanks!