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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This has such promise.

...but I find the format jarring and a bit disjointed. There are some lovely images created but I would really like to see the verses less broken to create a smoother flow. Well done though.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
ecstasy

Nice play on the word ecstasy ~ sweet X to See.

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