All Comments on 'Yesterday I Saw an Orchid'

Admittedly not an easy and obvious read, is this metaphorically written piece. Is this an alt for someone we know? Or perhaps not? Reveal yourself on the Poetry Feedback & Discussion Forum. Oh and in either case, congrats on that little greenie. Finally looking at your other piece I'm surprised it also didn't get one.

Well crafted, with a metaphor that speaks to the reader on a million different levels. Kudos to you.

If a poem EVER deserved an E, this one does. excellent inages and what a metaphor. a walkin' talkin' orchid.I hope she gets to read this.

loved this, just loved it!!

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the speaker said as a large ominous shadow passed over aisle 3

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