All Comments on 'You Are Braided Inside Me Forever'

is a nice line. The form of the poem as a run on paragraph detracts from the coded information, nice symbolism but not ready yet for prime time. Sometimes serious works have to be birthed a bit slower. I thought cross boilination was a typo for cross pollination, but it seems to be a boiling process, which might describe the rush of images and surrealistic rants here in. Something that most of us women keep inside when we should be letting it out and moving our house to the other side of the street.