All Comments on 'You know you want to'

So far everything I've read has been great. It's refreshing to read another writers work; and yours injects a gamut of emotions; as well as finding a word or phrase that also adds a very real sense of humor to experiences so deeply passionate.

Good on ya. Keep it up.

Wolvesheart.

normally, I dont care much for rhyme, but you did it well, and yeah, the end, shocked me, ( I said, the END)

you did a good job!!

I am truly enjoying reading you. just went back through your poems list and read six or seven of them. you have a terrific sense of humor and I look forward to more of your work

hugs

maria

Was it more of an erotic - shocking poem or more of a shocking poem which happened to be about...you can read for yourself! I'll give it its due respect for its smart structure (we were quickly warned about the shock right at the begining). Those who did not want/ dared to make a comment (is that because it's a woman's voice who talks 'like that'? Tssst.. Not in Literotica! Or maybe there are not enough allusions to Frost to warrant a comment?

Thank you, and I am ready to be shocked again (now, you'll have to find a new way though).