by sack
pen for me...rewinding the past of cold hearted love...images are vivid...ty...sigh...blue
That was beautiful and poignant. You really know how to reach out and grab someone by the heart strings and then yank...It's sad and sweet and everything it should be.
(a chance to give and receive) love, told in a few terse words!
The lines drip with sadness and longing!
The people before me said everything I could have said and better than I could so I won't disgrace them or your poem by saying anything but....
Here's a hug just for you.
Love it Sack ~!!
Very poignant and heartbreaking poem. Filled with pain and torment. I can see the image of the baby, the child, and the man you were becoming. Just a wonderful poem. Feeling your pain and giving in ... Hugging you ... my friend ~!
Lovin it !
More Please~
Contemplation of childhood images of love withheld. A now mature adult ~A generous spirit of forgiveness.