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All Comments on 'You Rock My World'

by BiCuriousKitty82

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Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Sounds like the rhythm and tempo were pitch-perfect!

MarthaMcKinleyMarthaMcKinleyover 2 years ago

I love your meter and rhythm, and that with your word choices being new and unusual, you take an act that is very commonplace and make it metaphysical.

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