by sack
What a magnificent poem to write about your father. Very, very good writing.
i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temp rating here is so that it does not affect other temp ratings that follow. - wildsweetone
So recently I lost my Mum at 91 one month short of being 92 ... two weeks before still bright as a button but at the end she didn't know me anymore but still I went to her ..
An excellent tribute to your father. Exceptionally well done.