All Comments on 'Your alarm clock'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
Excellent

way to start the day

very nice and erotic poetry <grin>

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
It Certainly is

A lovely way to start the day! What a pleasure it is to read an original erotic poem that isn't filled with cheesy cliches and overused phrases. This is a a true erotic treasure, well done! ~ J

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Who needs an alarm clock...

when you can be woken up like this instead? Much enjoyed!

dcpoetdcpoetabout 19 years ago
nice movement....

with nice images throughout and submissive in content. nice job!!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
subtle

You have a talent for well written porn. I love this.

LapisLazzuliLapisLazzulialmost 14 years ago
Wonderful!

From unconsciousness to full arousal. With no stops in between. Bliss! Thanks Sabina. This made me grin like a fool.

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