by My Erotic Tale
I'm at a loss for words, and I am awe of your words. So many wonderful images and sounds that come close to duplicating the song of water. Damn this one's good.
Tremendous effort with a beautiful end result. What a gift
after all that's what a good read is? A gift we read one word at a time.
Tremendous effort with a beautiful end result. What a gift
after all that's what a good read is? A gift we read one word at a time.
the lines in quotations are by zatoichi-san in case your confused about what a tribute is, this is sections or a small description of the movies, the blind Samurai~
the lines with out quotation marks are my description of scenes, I WANT to high light what is mentioned at the bottom of the poem, about the star and the year of the movies, oldie but goody, if you ever get a chance to watch this japanese made movie (yes words are typed in american at the bottom <grin>)I recommend them.
said the blind man to the deaf man, Art you continue to amaze me, of course with this one you had a little help, you know how I love Ichi san.
Nin:)
The visuals are stunning here. I feel the calm notes laced amongst the tension of this poem. This is good work dear and I enjoyed it greatly.
Du~
I am a fan of Ichi san and you capture the man as well as the character he played in the Samuri series.
Congadulations Art, you've joined the ranks of those who have written lines, I wish I had, FWIW
"Perhaps a falling leaf does hate the wind?"
Drip, Drip, Drip is priceless here:
"Bathed in blood so many times,
He wishes to know red.
How do you describe such a color?
To a man who has never seen the setting sun
Or a red maple leaf?
Drip drip drip drip
Ichi san smiles,
listening to the waters song."