All Comments on 'ZMP ~ tree whiskers'

Looking the real

with eyes youthful fresh

but I still like my thought from the thread

I love the visuals and the simplicity of the work. Something missing though in the last line. I would rework it. It lacks the power of the rest of the poem. Otherwise a wonderful ZMP again my friend

du~

You know I love your work

my friend, but then apparently

i'm a gusher!...lol

but i really like the feel of this

and it flows beautifully.

Thanks for the ZMP,

~ Jenn

I LIKE ZMPS!!! This is good & Im glad your tree is just old & not dead to!!!

where have all the old beards gone?

they hang from limbs,

long and gray,

shading the belly of a tree.

and somewhere, mossy men

tug curiously

at their spanish whiskers.