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the eroticism of focusing on shared details.
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artwork by shadow_storm
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Late one night,
“Hello.”
I met a girl,
“How are you?”
in some dubious chat,
“Thanks, you too!”

Words were rolling,
time flew by.
I was soft and kind
and such a nice guy.

With age shared,
and our pets’ names too,
The Question arose,
“Send a picture of you?”

To my surprise
she replied instantly.
No sweet-talk required
like she'd been waiting just for me.

Dumbstruck at first.
Everything blurred!
Was this bare skin?
My mind was stirred.

Shyness melting
like early hoar.
Was this a chance
to ask for more?

The not-so-sweater-girl
in a generous mood,
“Tell me your thoughts
after you’ve viewed”

I couldn’t believe my luck,
a swimsuit model on the screen?
In all these drab years
where have you been?

Extolled her well shaped body
like an Old Masters’ painting.
Her proud smile returned
she got lots of training.

Thoughts’ reign consigned
to the governor below,
my loosened tongue queried
if there was more to show.

The stream of bits poured
in my mouth a drought,
hungry eyes glued to
her outline zoomed out.

Such a classy dame
with midriff shimmer.
My sinful appendix
felt like a winner.

The lady remarked
she’s into chains.
Her full image next
made to leave stains.

This fashion thing
surrounding her neck?
Respond to my prying
threw me back.

“Thank you, nice guy
who made me misbehave,
and in next to no time
a well-punished slave.

“My painful reward
so easily earned.
One arm already bound
before my Sir returned.

“He loves his rivals
kind and smart.
Oh...any moment
he will start.

“This collar so tight
leash left, in his fist
his right hand raised
don’t want to be missed.”

Later one night
“Thanks and goodbye,”
leaving behind
this damn nice guy.

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BigpickleBigpicklealmost 3 years ago

It didn't do much for me.

MsNatalie99MsNatalie99about 3 years ago

Brilliantly executed. I love the rhyme and flow, accompanied flawlessly by the art. I was moved by the subtly shifting tone leading to an spectacularly subversive ending. Bravo!

ditzylildollditzylildollover 3 years ago
Very Good

I love the flow and subject matter of the poem and the artwork is sublime x

Emmie16Emmie16over 3 years ago

This is wonderful. Whenever you two collaborate it's always so great and this is no exception!!

NikkiAddamsNikkiAddamsover 3 years ago

Thanks for sharing

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