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A big Thank You goes out to shadow_storm for letting me use his artwork.

Hope you like the result.

Loved the way it turned out :)

<3

Another 5 - By melding two arts, the sum is definitely greater.

The stream of bits poured

in my mouth a drought,

hungry eyes glued to

her outline zoomed out.

Such a classy dame

with midriff shimmer.

My sinful appendix

felt like a winner.

The lady remarked

she’s into chains.

Her full image next

made to leave stains.

This fashion thing

surrounding her neck?

Respond to my prying

threw me back.

“Thank you, nice guy

who made me misbehave,

and in next to no time

a well-punished slave.

“My painful reward

so easily earned.

One arm already bound

before my Sir returned.

“He loves his rivals

kind and smart.

Oh...any moment

he will start.

“This collar so tight

leash left, in his fist

his right hand raised

don’t want to be missed.”

Later one night

“Thanks and goodbye,”

really classy BDSM POEM!!!! THNX4SHARIN'!!!!

Thanks for sharing

This is wonderful. Whenever you two collaborate it's always so great and this is no exception!!

I love the flow and subject matter of the poem and the artwork is sublime x

Brilliantly executed. I love the rhyme and flow, accompanied flawlessly by the art. I was moved by the subtly shifting tone leading to an spectacularly subversive ending. Bravo!

It didn't do much for me.