All Comments on '1, 2, 3.. As Easy as ABC Ch. 22'

If you can't tell a story in 5 or 6 ch you need to write a novel. More then that and it's just verbal dieria. Why would I want to go back and read 21 ch just to catch up with your story? Not going to happen. So who knows if this is good or not? I know I don't and never will. Please find another story to tell or quit.

I really LOVE this series. The way I see it is, that if you can keep your main characters interesting and your readers intrigued by the 22nd chapter you're good. This is absolutely, without a doubt, my favorite read on the site.

I started and couldn't stop reading this series. Its addicting but in an oh so effing good way. My thanks to BD for sharing.

i loved this series. some people were just hatin on you uwriting skills there just mad that they cant do 22 ch themselfs soo f the pepple that dont like this story

i hope that there will be more

Congrats boo_dreaux, this story totally absorbed me, it was top quality.

To the anonymous reader who complained, if you don't want to read 22 chapters, then don't. Go find yourself a short story to read and leave the reading of these to those who enjoy these types of story!

I seriously love this series why don't you make a sequal and the description about jo brillient made me want to meet that charicter know what I mean

I cannot stress enough that this series is abso-fucking-lutely wonderful! I started reading it, found it intriguing, and ended up reading all 22 chapters in one sitting, and I don't regret it at all. The writing was excellent, and the sex scenes even better.

It is amazing that you can even spell with a mind so closed. Did you get your red-neck parent to write it for you. I am as straight as you profess to be, but me thinks thou dost protest to loudly son. I am also open-minded enough to allow myself to enjoy things that are not included in my life style. You sell yourself WAYYY short if you limit you mind so radically as you seem to. You are only going to live about a quarter of the life you could if you narrow your vision into such a dank tunnel, dood!

As much as these hot ladies turn me on, I suspect my next reincarnation will be as a lezzie. I love loving women. It does not take much imagination on my part to role play one of the sisters :) It's like the old joke of the cowboy after meeting a lez in the bar :) Loosen up a little; go for the gusto; try on a few sets of glasses; relax bud. Life is too short to spend it up tight. I am 70 and just returned home yesterday from the cardiac intensive care unit of a local hospital. I was not scared of "going" as the last 35 years of my life have been full of love and I look forward to loving the next existence too. Would have been a hell of a shame to miss all of that!! Lynn

This is an amazing story, I loved it. You are an incredible writer. Thanks so much for this story. I'd love to read more.

Great story loads of sex n a nice twist in ireland the family secret

FIRST: terrific series, well written, good level of details and character development. Thank for sharing with us, the audience of readers.

SECOND: posting new comments helps push the "mindless haTer" back and off the visible comments. It continues to amaze me the level of energy expended by such undereducated hateful folks to dig down to the level of each story to post such nonsense.

Absolutely amazing! Couldn't put it down!!!

Encore! Encore!

Saw this so many times and thought to long - how stupid I was. DEFO BRILLIANT

Good series

Loved it got lost a few times in the beginning with all the different characters but soon realized I didn't mind :)

I have read a great many stories since finding Literotica. And I have to tell you this will definitely stand out as one of the more memorable ones. I very pleased to award another 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I love this story thank you the writer

that was a really good story loved it from the beginning to end oh yea the sex was great also

Great story, but WTF happened with Jean?? How could she just stop appearing??