All Comments on '1 Cock+1 Cock+1 Pussy=Fun'

Nice, but I would have liked more action. Also, since it's a fantasy, I'm not big on using condoms.

Thanks,

Adam

All that time passes and nothing happens until a great idea comes along and they throw mattresses on the floor and go at it? Not very plausible.

"occasionally his hands moved further down her legs nearer her pussy"? Was she put together upside down? I think you had a good story in mind but didn't execute it very well. Keep trying.

good but you needed to write more about her underwear, she wasnt inteding of watching the porno movie naked was she, you need to write about her stripping

Very good....like to see more though.the undressing -seduction part could have been longer..but I enjoyed it.

How I would love to be fucked and licked by two men!!..it would be awesome.

Oh my my fantasy..... i would love two men giving me that kind of attention.

Really good, you definitely made my pussy wet reading that. I'm going to bed right now to cum w/ my dildo thanks to you, keep it up.

Although it is a bit short, I like a short and to the point story. Made my cock hard and reminded me of some times past. Keep up the good work

Overall I liked it, but using a condom, esp in a fantasy? The point of view was a little odd for a stroke story, but could work with a bit more detailed observation.

Liked on the whole but agree with other commenters, condoms in a fantasy? Still, the writers fantasy so. Made my cock hard and my lady a little damp lol. Please write more

wow, when i read that, i had to strip. i just did and now im reallll horny, any guys wanna have some fun?

could make that pussy feel good. Sounds like there are a few readers that got a wet pussy reading this story. Nothing stopping you from trying out this scene yourself. Have fun. Now I wouldn't mind having two women give me that kind of attention. Fair is fair. ML

loved this my hubby wants us to try it an now i think we should...lol

I need some pussy........