by Spartan22
Hey Tazz, I'm getting a little irritated about your self serving comments on every single story I've read today and generally your comments are cryptic at best. how about you just send the writer a private message, your comments are obviously being deleted for a reason.
Ahh. You bitch. If Luke drops Kaylee without hearing her out and understanding her insecurities I'm gonna be pissed.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Seriously, can't wait, give it to me now.
I see a fight maybe brewing...DO NOT keep us waiting tofind out, please.
And there was me thinking that it was only me getting severely pissed off by Tazz's comments!!
Are a master of suspense..Im damn lucky I haven't had sudden heart stoppage
So my second guess was right he did have a wreck. Well a meteor hitting the house would be so messy. LOL Seriously thank you for a great story. Something tells me that if something like that ever happens again Kaylee won't be mad she'll be terrified. Can't wait to see how things progress. Again thank you. I've enjoyed it!
Tazz317, i think the reason your comments get deleted is pretty obvious. You go to loving wives section and insult the cuck stories. I support you on that but those fag authors take offense to that shit. *chuckles.
Good story btw. Formulaic but well written. And thats what matters anyways right?
Please hurry up with the next chapter! Enjoying the story so getting impatient.
I love this story. Please try to not keep us waiting too long for the next chapter/s!
Need chapter nine. Fast.
two timeline problems:.
After he is in bed with his arm in a sling, he gets awfully active quickly.
And in this chapter, with a recently burned hand, he caresses her hair.
But who cares, the characters are so different that they carry the story.
Thank you.
I do hope they remain calm and have a nice civil discussion when he hears the rant she left him on the phone (this was before the accident of course when she thought he bailed on her), as unlikely as that may be - teenagers and their tendency to overreact and all that jazz. I just hope she didn't do anything really stupid in her anger between then, you know something involving an ex-boyfriend (doubtful I know, but I wouldn't put it past authors on this site).