All Comments on '$100 Girlfriend'

Mr. Lott;

Very good story. Well thought out and interesting.

However, it could be better. Your narration is well done, but i think you should let your characters speak for themselves. Rather than tell use what was said, let then say it.

Thanks for the tail.

R

Boring

Very enjoyable! Reminds me of JimBob44.

Writing style seems similar.

***Thanks for the read.

Thanks!

Nice little story.