All Comments on '#13 Here'

Nice intersect for your characters. Loved you using our collective angst to lead to something positive

Loved it. Been waiting for a new story from GoneGray. I was not disappointed.

Tremendous story. I am a fan of Romance stories and this was the best.

Excellent romance story, enjoyed it a bunch. My only fuss, was them not applying for unemployment as soon as they got laid off. That's the only hitch to your story.

a most satisfying writer!

Thanks once again.

What a fun story! I very much enjoyed the story, the sex at the end wasn't bad either. Had this old man tearing up a couple of times, so it did get all five stars. Had to stop reading for a while when I Googled "Sambuca". I've never heard of it before but after reading about it, I'm going to give it a try. It's a little pricey but I love Licorice.

Thanks for a great love story.

Wow, my feelings of the second of your stories is like the first. Great job! I would have liked their first time to have been more tender, or read about their second time right after the first to have been that way.

But what do I know? I'm just the perv reading your stories; not brave enough to submit my own to others reactions.

Thanks for sharing this tale of love.

I'm an old guy looking for great stories about what might have been in my life. Please know that you are, without a doubt, the very best writer I have found and that I greatly appreciate your reality-based story lines and your excellent use of language that allows me to know the characters. Please accept my very best wishes and my sincere hope for your continued success. Thank you, Sir!

You should issues warnings! People could burn themselves on the heat this story gives off!

What a great little romp and I adore the characters...

As usual for you, thing just flow very naturally...

You're quickly becoming one of the best writers here on Literotica...

You're latest story was equally good...

You know how to set a scene and you know how to flesh out characters with just a few strokes...

There are people that could spend a lifetime trying to do what seems to come utterly naturally to you.

Nice pacing and fantastic conversations. I know it's a good story when I can see it happening in my mind and you did that thanks.

Thanks for the great imagination and the well written story!

Quite the story. The heated innocence story just brings a smile to my face. This was just fun to read.

DP

Nice to read a COVID story with a happy ending!

A manipulative little hussy. Got everuthing she wanted, and poor Nate is going to find life goes in big circles.

Fabulous, wonderful wtitong! If only real life went so well....;-)

It's fun to read a story that can be viewed in different ways. Was it innocence or a plan to avoid home. Who really cares it was a great read. Thanks for sharing!

DP

Dang! I think I’m in love with her too.

Reading, again, and still a really great read!! GoneGray, you do write a great story. Thank you! Any new writings, here or elsewhere?

I really adore this story!