All Comments on '14B'

I wonder who her travel agent is also, I think she put her cellphone in the other woman's purse on purpose, just to be able to see her again

United 532 goes from Denver to Boston via Chicago. I don't think United has any direct flights from St Louis to LA. Even in fiction it helps to get the little things right.

Wow what a marathon narrative

Don't care about the flight routes as I was totally engrossed

thanks for sharing such an erotica

I loved reading 14B! All the small detail; the feeling you put into your main character, gave her life and thus brought your story to life. I love a story that feels real and full of life. Thank you for sharing :)

You've got style, dear heart. Your writing is wonderfully descriptive & so rich in detail. I was able to experientially enjoy this amazing tale. 5 well deserved stars, & thank you.

XOX

Taylor

I really enjoyed this story. So well written and thought out. The erotic descriptions put me right there as a voyeur to the action, not an easy task for a writer. Kudos. I look forward to more stories from you. Perhaps she will tell her fiance about this liaison and enjoy his reaction. I doubt after a memorable first time like this with a woman that it will be her last.

I really liked 'The Closet' but this is even better. I put a scene in my latest story that details two women on a plane so GMTA. There were a few niggling mistakes (B is not a window seat on a 757, how does somebody standing in the aisle (not isle) putting something in an overhead compartment step on the toes of someone seated in a window seat?). There were also assorted spelling, missing words and grammar errors but nothing a good proofreading couldn't have caught.

I was going to take off one star for the little careless errors until I got to the last line. My wife is a travel agent. 5*

I lol'd at the ending. This was hot!

Ok, I can't resist...

"Because after what happened to me exactly almost years ago today"

which one is it? ^_^

Ok, back to reading.

Mmm mmm mmm. So sensuous. So erotic. So hot. I would just love to experience that at least once in my life. The thrill of almost getting caught doing something naughty with a beautiful stranger is on my bucket list. I'm only 26 and there's still time to accomplish that. What a great sexy story.

Ok, gotten to finish reading it now... Damn that's hot.

Not only is the whole setting and by all means - the story, highly erotic. I really really appreciate HOW this is written. Not a word, not a comma, nothing is there not filling its purpose. A true joy reading.

Thank you

The take away here for me is never say what you won't do cause until you're presented with that situation you don't know. And if you're lucky, you may end up with an enjoyable memorable experience like our girl here. Great story!

That was the most erotic, pleasing thing I have ever read in my life. The characters, the setting, the sudden lust to the new sexuality just made me as wet as she was on the plane. More, more, more X

At that time I was a young and totally inexperienced (lesbian wise) female of 24 years.

The flight was non-stop and was almost empty. Seated next to me was the most beautiful and attractive stewardess I have ever seen. To make a long story short she made me realize the other world of sex (lesbian) and to this day I will always be grateful. We saw each other for about 10 years and then drifted apart. :-(

I absolutely loved this. Kept me lubricting the entire time and various parts had me holding back moans with great difficulty. One of my favorites on here 😍

Great job, keep it up 👍🏽

I can identify with this. A similar thing happened to me on a flight from New York to Santiago Chile.A232

Thank you for sharing this with me! I Love your work . . . See you soon I hope . . . It has to rain again sometime soon.

XOXO,

Becca

Oh my god, you have talent. Extremely hot. Keep them coming and thank you

OH MY GOD!!!!!! The end had me shook 😂😂😂 "holy shit, we forgot to check the stalls" 😂😂😂 hella weak

I loved the detail and the public setting. It would have been great to know more about the protagonist, but exhibitionism is a huge turn on for me and this story had me very wet...

The best thing I've read for ages. The last line was perfect!

Who cares about flight times / schedules?!

Who cares about which seats are which?!

I flew many times for a previous job and wish one of my flights were as exciting as this. Color me jelly for the commentor who said something similar happened!

This is one worth reading and rereading again and again!

That was amazing…the ending, just icing baby