All Comments on '15 Rue de l'Ascension Pt. 01'

Slow, sensuous and simply wonderful. The build up, the awareness of what turns on a real woman, as opposed to a fantasy 'cumslut' (urgh!), this is truly one of the best stories I have read on this site. (Please note also any other authors, the lack of derogatory language and long boring details about breast size, shaved pussies and so forth.) I am even ready to overlook a few writing errors that grated slightly. Keep this standard up. So deliciously understated and so English.

Really impressed with this story! I hope to read more about these characters soon!

absolutely beautiful!!

Not perfect, aubmat, you need to learn to edit yourself better, or find an editor. For example: 'mutually pleasurable to both', and there are quite a few more which just take the edge off it occasionally.

But niggling apart, a very fine story. Not knowing any prostitutes (that I know of), the woman's part is not that of the stereotypical tart. But then we are all human, and which human is a stereotype? I believed in her, as I did in him. Well done.

GREAT read - the foreplay, and interaction between the two was so hot and best of all..REALISTIC!

This is one of the best stories I think i've ever read on this site! It went somewhere beyond just a sex story, i actually felt for the characters, and the emotions they had seemed real, and touching. This was an actual beautiful story, and i loved every second of it.

Simply beautiful, and truly alive with passion and deep understanding of the perfect ecstasy only possible in sex.

Erotic, passionate, and loving. Well written and interesting. 5/5 thank you

I throughly enjoyed this story. There are, as pointed out already, a few typos and grammatical errors but otherwise a fine read. I too appreciate the lack of use of vulgar language and exaggerated sexual references.