All Comments on '1714 Ch. 01'

Please please? I want to see what happens! I want it brutal. Please? The description, the way the words are written... You can't leave me with an effing cliffhanger!

Need the next chapter, please. Great so far

Please continue the story

This is some demented shit! Who takes their Rolls Royce or Ferrari and do 100mph down a pothole dilapidated street. I'm not liking the way they're treating the slave. It's abuse not BDSM. But I will hold out for chapter 2.

I think its a good piece, but dont want the torture of the poor slave, if u have a second publish please.....let there be a happy ending

Kiwi gal

I know this is a made up story, but I could not get into it

Waiting eagerly for the next part!