All Comments on '18 yo Schoolgirl Gets a Mouthful'

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j_lungriaj_lungriaover 17 years ago
Too Short

The story is really good, but way too short. Not enough actual sex. Good start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot little piece of smut.

Hot and well written. This short tale is a minor erotic masterpiece. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
abuse

The story is too abusive. The teacher is a creep. She would have given him head anyway. It was her gift... let her give it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Too violent

This is bordering on abuse. Well written and erotic at first, but the forceful conclusion spoils it completely.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 14 years ago
What a clean up...

she would need after that rough teacher shot a load all over her face. It was a short story but interesting. Thanks.

RedHead*MuseRedHead*Museover 14 years ago
Note: This is the non-consent section!

The readers who cried "abuse" and "violence" must not realize this is a pornographic, smut story website and you're in the non-consent section. This is fiction & all things in perspective, the little bit of rough play isn't truly abuse or violent compared to other stories. If you find this offensive, go back to reading "Jack & Jill went up the hill ...", or don't read stories in this section.

Great little erotic tale; terrific tense & writing style, tension, plot, dialog. Please write more - you're so good at it!

shadow506shadow506over 14 years ago
WOW!!!!

Its a terrific story well written and I have to say I loved it, my only quip would be that it was a little too short. I certainly hope there is more to cum. LOL Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
so hot

this story turned me on.

My pussy is dripping just thinking of wat it would b like if i was that 18yr old slut n my teacher did that to me.

its so erotic the way the teacher forced her. How he grabbed her hair n fucked her mouth like she was a fuck doll.

I want to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
oh lord!

This brings me back, had a crush on my sophomore teacher, wished every day and night something like this would happen between us. That's all i could picture as I read. Me doing that to him.

alltruekkinkytalesalltruekkinkytalesover 7 years ago
so hot!

fuck this made me wet! i love stories told in this format.

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