All Comments on '1925 Modern Gloria'

Loved it, had a great many details that made the story beliveable.

Had a few spelling errors, but that can be fixed using spell check.

I hope you have more to write as you left us hanging, I gave you five stars something I don't do often so don't disappoint me.

Great story. Hope to read more of Gloria's adventures. Thanks.

This story was VERY well written! I wish I

had understanding cousins like Gloria's .

Getting to see a real live vagina that early

In life would have a been a dream come true

for me.

Damn fuck i want to do this.

well written & very imaginative. also a very fun read. i wasn't around in 1925 but i was close enough to understand most of the terms about which i had forgotten.

i know it's been a while but there has to be more.

now, i gave this story 5***** on its merit. however, after reading several of this author's stories, she has the frustrating tendency to not finish a story. i don't know why that is.

there is plenty of opportunity in this story for more, lots more.

thanx,

beretta

Great story, will we ever see the next chapter?

Excellent story, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I am waiting for Chapter Two.

An excellent fun story, hot too. 5 stars.

Beautiful use of 20s slang. Great story

...but too many anachromisms (not to mention typos). Good imagination, though, and writing isn’t bad— if you’d get a copy editor, you could produce some really good work.

Please, Please get the Author to do some more episodesof Gloria & her Friends & Mrs Gumble.

YjFetgThere is a lot more episodes for Gloria, she could go to the Speak Easy with MRS Gumble, Gloria could have an afair with Mrs Gumble, Gloria could get more sexually involved in Drugs & sex, Mrs Gumble could introduce Gloria to extremly bizarre sex Clubs.

The Author is very Talented & must do more episodes for Gloria, maybe some Office affairs with the Law firms Client's.

Yours Sincerely James