All Comments on '1987'

The first paragraph suggests that the narrator is a high school freshman

"It was the summer of 1987. I'd gone to live with mom after her and dad divorced my freshman year of high school."

It turns out that the break he's on must be from college - later you make it clear he's 20 - but that first paragraph needs revision

One thing that ALWAYS detracts from an erotic story is the author's use of numbers - 8 inch cock, C cup bra - let the readers use their imaginations (or fantasies - 8 inch cocks, Literotica notwithstanding, are outliers

File it under Bin or better in it

"lady parts" Lady parts? Thought this was set in 1987 - more like 1897.

We see these all the time. High school/college kids of exceptionally low intelligence but stamped 18-y-o ( I hope it's not our typical American students ) are written all over the first pages to qualify for submission on this miserable site. What a bunch of hypocrites. As for the measurements, I suppose readers here are minded for that sort of things. Typical American mentality, or not! Nice thought though H.H.

You said "One thing that ALWAYS detracts from an erotic story is the author's use of numbers". Well, if you forget to write someone is aged 18, Literotica wouldn't even print it.