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Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10about 4 years ago
He is right!

It was LONG!

Kman280585Kman280585about 4 years ago
Amazing

One of the most well written erotic story! Waiting for upcoming chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loved this!

Very well written and almost no grammatical errors. Can't wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
outstanding writing

The writing in this first chapter of the story is excellent. The story has a good introduction, and the plot never drags for a moment. The erotic element is excellent, and not only in exactly the right proportion in the story, but serves to advance the plot very well. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Very erotic!

There is something about mnhb’s writing — it keeps you absorbed. It is amazing the way he captures the electricity and eroticism! And of course it gets you hot and horny.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Very well written, built up is amazing! Never vulgor, passionate and it is spell bounding till the very last !

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French expatriate working in Asia, primarily India and Vietnam, with an ache for sexual adventure and in constant search of love.