by Mnhb
One of the most well written erotic story! Waiting for upcoming chapters
Very well written and almost no grammatical errors. Can't wait for the next part!
The writing in this first chapter of the story is excellent. The story has a good introduction, and the plot never drags for a moment. The erotic element is excellent, and not only in exactly the right proportion in the story, but serves to advance the plot very well. Five stars.
There is something about mnhb’s writing — it keeps you absorbed. It is amazing the way he captures the electricity and eroticism! And of course it gets you hot and horny.
Very well written, built up is amazing! Never vulgor, passionate and it is spell bounding till the very last !