All Comments on '2 Alliance Square'

Really Really Great. Fantastic characters, great build up intertwined with an excellent romance. 5*

Utiful.

So very well crafted with fantastic characters. Thank you for such a great read.

Thank you for sharing this with us. I laughed reading about your uncooperative keyboard, I have one of those as well. Now going to read your previous works.

As ever a great read

I always look forward to your story. Yet another gem thank you.

Thanks for sharing.

I too spent a period of my life as a collector, both inside and outside. Your story rang a lot of bells. As for the rest. You are one of the best and this one did not disappoint.

Ms Ashley Dunn---remind me never to get on her wrong side. What a piece of work, a regular toughie. And what a very good story. I wasn't keen on the d/s bit, that's not my kind of thing. But the rest of the tale made up for that and I was able to overlook it. I can't recall reading any earlier stories of yours but I'll certainly be giving them a look now.

...but this might be my favorite of all your stories. Absolutely loved the characters, major and minor. I'm sure Nina has an interesting backstory. Thank you for this.

Thank you for writing a terrific story and having a happy ending! So many authors leave you hanging and never follow up with the next chapter. Thank you for a happy ending 😀

You outdid yourself with this one. Whenever I need something to boost my mood, I keep coming back to your stories; they are normal people facing real challenges and through the strength of character they overcome.

with richness and depth, and of course humor as always with JimBob. Thanks so much for another great story!

ohio

and storytelling just keep getting better and better. Your descriptive language of the furnishings and decorations was first rate. For other authors that would be a wasted tangent that clutters up the story. I find that with you it rounds out the character and tells us something about who they are. The environment people create for themselves, purposefully or by chance, is telling. Five Stars.

I like your writing, your characters are all interesting and believable.

Fantastic as always!! This one was different but a great read. I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Thanks for sharing your stories with us. Looking forward to your next submission.

Now I've got to make some root beer drop cookies.

You usually write very good stories. This was great. Thanks

I love love stories, and this one is very well done! Thank you!

Wish you had put the recipe for the root beer cookies at end. Never heard of them before.

What a well crafted, sensual story. I see why it is so well received.

Oh I loved this. First story of yours that I read and wasn’t expecting some of the twist and turns. Except for some editing it is so good. I look forward to more!

I appreciate you think a long involved story gives the reader time to really get into the characters. But most of the detail you give is laborious and irrelevant. And then when the sex comes, it's crude. So not many stars from me, I'm afraid.

I come back to your stories often, I re read them because the characters are real and enjoyable, Thank You for your contributions.

Still one of my favourites, original and makes me feel good

A good story with a fitting ending. Yes there are a few mistakes and it could be organised slightly better; continuity broke up once or twice. But it's good and it didn't work out as I was expecting.

You mentioned someone named Savannah on page 6, she doesn't exist, I think you meant Catrina.

Please fix it, stuff like that ruins the immersion.

Anonymous, Savannah is her date.

If you have more to add to these characters lives I hope you will share it with us. I've read their story several times (it is one of my favorites).

I just noticed that way too many “anonymous “ are way to anal…

At risk of being labelled "anal", I would just like to make my observation.

Tiffany suddenly became a lesbian. No indication of interest before the transformation, just straight in and whammo - she is a lesbian.

The story was great; loads of detail that held my attention, but my girlfriends and those in my social sphere all expressed an interest in other girls for quite a while before going any further. The closest I can relate to 'suddenly' becoming a lesbian is my sub friend Nell, whose dominant husband ordered her to service his male friends, then at one party decided she should put on a show with another wife who both felt much better with each other rather than some man who believes himself to be god's gift to women. Nell is still a sub, but she is her own sub with a safe word who gets to choose who she let's spank her.

Stay safe.

Lexi

I come to believe you add errors just fuck with the types that can't handle spelling errorrs!!🤣🤣🤣 Keep up the good work!

AC in SC

Loved this story start to finish. Six stars.

That was awesome… 5 stars doesn’t do it justice.. than you !

I come back about twice a year to read all of your stories, I really love your characters, they are all real people. Creating real people in literature is a real talent. Thank You for your stories.

Sweet!

Thanks for sharing your work!

Awesome love story. Thank you.

Just perfect Thank youuuuu so much

I'm givin' this seven stars! This is the second time I've read this, and I always am impressed that you're able to impart so much about your characters without explicitly describing them to death. Thanks for the great read!

Loved it. Emphatic, loving, well told. I really lived for those two. Thank you for that.

My second reading.

It is still excellent.

Two lovely girls who need and deserve each other. I think Ash will get lots of well deserved spankings, but also lots of lovely cuddles. And of course they both need love.

A lovely story

This was nice, thank you

Really great romance with a little D/S sprinkled in to make it more interesting.

Another excellent story.

Now that is a remarkable well written story with real and strong characters. I would love to read more about them and how they smash all prejudices and bigottry that still prevails in the US about living a LGBetcetc lifestyle. A true love story.

Top story. Top writer. Top five stars.

Looking forward to stories from 3 Alliance Square and 4 Alliance Square, a.k.a. Alliance Square Health Facilities, which should be a gold mine for you.