All Comments on '2 Weeks at My Uncles House'

Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

A nice intro to the taboo of uncle/niece sex... looking forward to the next chapter as your stories are always great..

Hope the second act is as " cum" selling!

I don't mean to be picky but your title is not correct.

'Uncles' is a plural word.

'Uncle's' is a singular word.

Any editor would have caught that error.

The rest of the story was great.

Loved this story, and as with one or two of your other stories, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Your stories never enter a boring stage, where the reader might skip through to get the interesting bit.

You build it up nicely, get to the sexy bit, then finish it in a way that always leaves you wanting more.

Great story made me hard I wanted you.

Well done and very hot, Beth! Got me nice and hard too.

This is a really hot story. 5 stars! Hoping for a second chapter.

A big thank you to all who have commented here. It means a lot to know my stories are appreciated. I will be working on the next chapter very soon. Feel free to pm me too, I’ve enjoyed talking to guys who have enjoyed aspects of my writing. Beth x

Excellent story! My main sub was introduced to sex by her uncle so I found this extremely hot.

Fun story, I liked the teasing part. Probably edging her uncle to blue balls!

Good story but your use of English has a lot to be desired. Lot's of broken sentences and run on sentences. Lot's of misspelled words or words that were used out of context.

You have a good idea of what turns people on but your writing skills need a LOT of work. Maybe go by some books on how to write and then try again.

How gutless of someone to comment on my story anonymously I welcome criticism but have some balls if you’re going to leave a strongly negative comment. Why even bother?

Beth,

This is a hot story. I think in the realm of incest stories, niece/uncle may be more likely and therefore the realism is easier to convey. Well done. Makes me desire a visit from one of my nieces. Well done.

Well written and a very enjoyable read. I really like the passion that you write with.

Solid enjoyment 🤓

Great.story, but.. Yes there is that "but". Please use a proofreader. Little wording hiccups ruin things.

You can be my niece!

Yum Yum, very nice stroking reading.

R 🥰

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Your description felt like was there.Good job if you need help with the next installment I would love to help....Dave!

Brought out the voyeur in me.

Wow Beth, such a hot story. I love the thought of a sexy niece trying to seduce her older uncle.

Would love to know if this is just a story or maybe something you have fantasised about concerning your own uncle if you have one.

Keep up the good work

You naughty niece...and I love every second of it.

WoW, that was a steaming story to say the least!.

I’m really into younger women with older guys-like myself but the idea of a niece seducing me had never crossed my mind. Now it has I’m imaging the scenario. Explosive.

So looking forward to your sequel to this story! 🤗

My apologies, the site only allowed me to give your story 5 stars. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

A fantastic tale of young taboo lust.....the creation of a cum swallower!

Notjust Anyguy

A great story, Beth. I like the long gradual build-up. Don't neglect your other uncles!

Uncle Nic xx

I'd love to read a story about how you discovered your fetish for older men and your first experience. I started with chatting online but I never found any stories that gave me much thrill

love the story

Fabulous story Beth.

All Dave's should be your quest😘😉

very hot story. Another 5 star "boner maker"

Great fun story to read with action and some humour. I was genuinely entertained. Please continue writing.