All Comments on '2nd Affair'

This story made my night...

It made me cum

DP is one of my biggest fantasies! Add a black man.. I was in heaven!

really enjoyed it and many others of your stories. it was really good and sex with my boyfriend later that night was great...all thanks to you. keep up the good work!!

I continue to award your stories the highest ratings since they're excellent stoke material and the latest installment of 2nd Affair was seriously hot.

At the same time, I wish, with your obvious writing skills, you'd make your characters a little less subject to her raging hormones and more self reflective. But of course, that would be a different story entirely so its not a fair criticism.

Good writing.

they gave you a ""1"".................damn idiots!!!!

very hot story!!!

It was so Hot a story that I wished I could feel two big and fat cocks pumping into me...mmmmm

You got what it takes when it comes to writing Literotica, I could almost feel the sensations myself.....keep on writing!!

Mike should have had a bigger penis than Jason and even with her being wet he would have a hard time entering her.

hey, next time my girlfriend wants a dp with an asian girl...

i really like ur story turned me on bout the blk guy fuckin erin loved the story keep it up.

Would have been better if in the ending she had become a slut to them both or more.

My husband thanks you for this story. It was great. It has always been a fantasy of mine.

ur ego shid hav no worries. haters will always try 2 put skilled peoople down. then there r always people who dont no how 2 follow instructions. forget em. story rocks

A few typos detract a little from the reading and some real colloquialisms (like "grinded" instead of "ground") crept into the script. However the storyline is still good and the detail is excellent.

A couple of comments: I'm glad you set up the cock sizes as you did. Reality is that not every black cock is bigger than every white cock.

Also Erin must have a raging yeast infection by now and is surely just dying to be fist fucked so someone can scratch that itch from the inside out. Anybody who fucks a woman in the ass and then sticks his cock in her pussy without cleaning up thoroughly doesn't give a damn about the girl. I think he should have just stuck it back in her ass and finished up; the results would have been just as good, maybe better.

Anyway, good writing; keep it up.

Made me cum.

I wish i could be erin!

I liked the story, but the roommate needed to stay, it added extra spice to the story, because it made Jason jealous and Erin liked that and like being with both men.

Beyond Hot!!!

I wish I could have been erin. Made me wet to read how pleasued she was. All that god cum!!

Unless the guys are using condoms Ass to Pussy (ATP)just like Ass To Mouth (ATM)is a big NO! NO! If you really like anal finish that way not in the pussy or the mouth, please give the female some respect and not kill them off with an infection.

One of the best.....keep them coming!

OUTSTANDING STORY! KEEP THEM COMING!

Great story. I liked the detail. Keep it coming....

Took me back to the days not so long ago I did this stuff. Just a word to let you know, during a MFM I kept a box of baby wipes handy AND, because I'm a safety girl, we used condoms...so before we went from one place to another it was a simple wipe down switch the rubber and go for it. The baby wipes helped clean up so no one had to run off to the bathroom. Also during a dp one male enters the ass past the head while the other enters the vagina, that way it doesn't hurt so badly or tear the girl..it's all about the awkward positioning thing. Hey I hope it helps. Awesome story however, I look forward to reading more of your stuff! Take care, angelsserenity76

Can't imagine anyone not loving your stories, unless they are racially uptight. I've not commented on each of the stories I've read, but they sure make me horny and ready to cum.

Keep up the good work :)

Later

Loved it. Erin's promise at the end is bull. Once fucked by Mike's black cock, she would want it again and again and again. I'm a white woman and should know - all white women will want more of that black baby seed. Keep it up!

I scan several stories a week to send to my husband and I have found that yours really get him going! Thank you for awesome stories, we both love them! Keep UP the good work!

I would not mind if my wife cheated on me like that. White cunts (and mouths and arse) should be fucked by black dicks.

wwapepep heyy bro...if you could mail me all of your stories

here is my e-addd hope for your reply

this is one hell of a story hope im the black guyzzz....i want to fuck that kind of a slut XD

t_t2k7@yahoo.com

hope for your mail....

and more fore sir

Great story. I looked up to read it a 3rd time, thanks. The other Erin ones are good too, all I've read of yours so far

Only 4 stars because of ass to pussy.

You never, never go direct from ass to pussy. Pussy to ass ok, but not the other way around. Ass without a condom is bad enough but ass to pussy on top of that is a big, huge NO NO.

what the hell is a calve ??? Spell check dude !!!!!

Do you have a hang-up with tiny feet ? Way, way over-used !!!

It gets a one because it IS a one, douche.

Love your writing, it's real fresh and the right length. I don't aggree with the critic about tiny feet. thanks

you had to be the one with the big dick in your story so you would feel better,I'll give you a 2 because you are not being real we all know that you have a thing against black fucking white women would you have felt different if it had been a black women,write about how they are fucking not because he black fucking a white women.

The author does write good stories and I gave other series stories all 5s because the stories were outstanding.

However, this story is garbage. First only 1% of guys have cocks 8” or more and perhaps less than 1 in 100,000 have 9” cocks so the odds of roommates both having cocks 8” or more too unlikely. Further, cocks over 8” are the result of genetic defects and that is not sexy. And, 8” or greater cocks don’t shoot sperm, they ooze.

Second Randy, the guy she is engaged to, is obviously retarded and would rather go out and get drunk than to fuck the girl he is engaged to. How likely is it that a very pretty girl that loves sex would get engaged to a low IQ guy that is not interested in sex?

Perhaps that Randy is not interested in sex is the one good thing about the story since Anonymous is correct. Ass to pussy results in infection so she is going to be out of commission for a while as far as having sex while she is being treated for vaginal infection. Since Randy is not interested in sex, I guys her being treated for vaginal infection is no big deal.

Another reason the story deserves a 1 is the story is too perverted to be sexy. And, obviously the girl has psychological problems and stories about girls with mental problems are certainly not sexy. The girls may be sexy until you realize that they are retarded or mentally disturbed.

You just had to give Jason a donimant role.How racist is that?The white dick bigger?The white Jason giving directiom to everybody?

You write very well but because you show a tendency to be a racist idiot,I gave you a ONE

hope she catches a disease

You probably got a "1" rating on your stories because of the need you seem to have for making white blonde women into black loving sluts - TOTAL SHIT - so shit that I will not even rate this story.

Sarah Leather, London England (32yo married fit tanned & toned leather wearing blonde mum of two)

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

I found your story very erotic. I know that Erin should not be cheating on her future husband but my wife has this fantasy about having sex with a black man. And my fantasy is making it happen. So I gave you a 5 because it was well writen, erotic and different. I'll be looking for your othe bi-racial stories.

1. Lots of comments about ass-to -pussy or ass-to-mouth being a no-no, infection, etc. Obviously you folks have never had anal with a 'clean' woman. Anal is my wife's favorite sex, especially with very large cocks...and she is SUPER clean. She showers and cleans herself for at least 1/2 an hour - high enema - there'sNothing in her. We've been doing 3sums with extra large for 15 yrs. Ass to pussy..never had an infection of any kind.

2. Someone mentioned the extreme low % of large cocks. We've never had a problem finding long term super size 3s partner. That said a woman cannot take a 10" cock the 1st time , or several times comfortably...a vagina will stretch to as much as 8" in length but then the cock is jamming into her cervix. MOST women, maybe all women find that very uncomfortable to down right painful. It takes time, as in numerous 3s for a woman's cervix to learn to dilate...that cock has to go somewhere if all of it is being slammed into her pussy. Have you ever noticed that very few porn actresses can fully take those extra large cocks? It takes time and a steady diet of those monsters to be able to enjoy a good hard fuck from those. The biggest cock my wife ever had was a white man, it took her 10 weeks of pretty regular sex with him to finally take him all comfortably. He was her only 1 on 1 lover for over 12 yrs.

Part of her comfort was that she would be soaking wet the entire time they fucked and would be cumming almost non-stop.

Hot me Rock hard

These stories are amazing and remind of my wife and what she does- of course with my blessings. I love watching her also having sex with guys that have big cocks. She really enjoys fucking a lot and loves that I allow her to have all the sex she wants and needs. Keep up the writings