All Comments on '2nd Time Alone With My Father-In-Law'

This telling was very unexciting at the least. I can't tell you how to improve the story unless you make it a story. I may as well have been knocking my head against a wall reading this. Anyone can put words on paper and describe sex in a monotone, rev this thing up and try again.

RS

I'm not even remotely a writer. But using pronouns instead a person's name repeatedly makes a story flow. And "know" is being aware of something. Not when answering in the negative.

Forget what those other Anon assholes say. This was a great fap story! I can't wait for the 3rd Time!

Looking forward to more of the story please keep it coming

Fucking your father-in-law is not incest. It's simply adultry.

You misspell a lot of words like using "their" for "there" and "know" for "no". I'd run your next story by a good editor, one that knows grammar. : )

And I would think there are a few more stories to be told about Angie and Mitch.

What do you think?

please continue!!!!

the last time that i had sex with my father in law was one year after i got married and i love it