by Scott_Free
Now that heir feeling for each other are in the open this should get really interesting, hopefully Julia takes it well in the end.
5*
Amazing work. You are a master at weaving sex with complex emotions. The way he took her against the wall after making her cry was so damn powerful. Love Katie's potty mouth, too. She's the perfect blend of sassy, rough, and vulnerable. I wish I could meet a girl like her in real life. Especially with that big booty of hers. Big brother needs to spank that ass til it matches her hair.
Not only that, but his emotional age is 10. Just a bit too inconsistent to be believable. 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Anyone who plans to have sex without contraception is planning to get pregnant. Is that really part of the girl's plan? Why? This, "Cum inside me, I'll take the Morning After Pill," is just irritatingly stupid. Why doesn't Jack have condoms? He can take responsibility too. He's an adult.
This vacation home must be GIGANTIC, or Jack's parents must drink themselves into an alcoholic stupor in the evenings for them not to hear what's going on. Or does the idea of their children and niece fucking around with each other excite the parents?
I agree...Here are 2 very active sexual women and neither one on any type of birth control. Katie is just 18 yet she had 2 long term BF sexual relations. Not enough time. See my email
You guys are in for the greatest story ever seen on here . This is my second time reading it (I read it before it disappeared on here) it is the best story on here
Yes, a great story and build up. Now that its happened; hopefully they will do it all the time in different places and when their parents are gone; slow and great !! I hope now the dialogue is more involved and all then beautiful emotions flow well for them. Of course, his baby sister will teach him how to be a great lover and she will benefit greatly. Maybe they will move in with each other and become a couple ?? Thank you !
I'm really glad to see that they are finally ringing each others bells. I can't wait to see which direction you are going from here. Good job!
THIS - IS - GOOD !
And it's only chapter 3 !
How much better does it get ?
It is just as fantastic the second time.
How does a guy choose between 2 incredibly beautiful women?
I was hesitant to read this series at first, now I'm not even sure why. Was it that I didn't think it would be good? Maybe it was something else. Anyway, I'm glad I took the chance. So far it's a good story, I like Jack and Katie... still on the fence about the cousin. She seems like a bitch almost assuredly, a wonton slut definitely, and I'm pretty positive she a born manipulator. That's not a person I like. I'm also scared shitless for Jack because of her. Not sure I buy all this talk about her really having multiple doses of the plan b pill. I'm not opposed to incest pregnancy under the right circumstances, but so far none of what I have read would qualify. From the title and all the foreshadowing I see a polyamorous triangle coming. Cousin is in love with Katie, Katie is in love with Jack, and both Katie and Jack are in Lust with cousin. It also looks like Jack will be falling in love with Katie. So what happens to the cousin? Will she move on? Will she confess her love for Katie... I dont think Katie is aware of her cousins true feelings.
I cant wait to read what happens next and how the story ends. Thanks to the Author.
Two things that Katie said were the best part of the chapter for me. First, she recognized Jack for trying to do the right thing and second, she knew that their intimacy was not a game. Best little sister ever! 5/5
This...is...???? I really am not going to use words to describe how I feel about this story.
ScottFree has undoubtably written one of the most emotion-packed sagas I have read to date...when I started reading, I saw it was only 3 chapters, now is up to...???
Nothing more to say, right now...lolling forward to seeing exactly where this is going...WWWHHHEEEEEEE!!
**5** STARS!! OF COURSE!!
wow just wow no words can say how hot this chapter is and its really just getting started