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Click hereAuthor's note: So this is the last chapter, but maybe not the final chapter. I had a great time writing all of this, and I still have stories that I could tell. I have other things to write, so it will not be anytime soon. I am going to give full time writing another try, and see what happens. Thanks to all the loyal readers. I am sorry that it has taken me so long to write this. I have been through job changes, surgery on my eye, and a string of debilitating migraines. I'm just glad that I have an ending to be proud of.
Kind of nice reading a story that started where I grew up. And ironically made a trip to where I live now. Lol. Lot of familiar references. Well done, I only have one suggestion for your continued writing. Less narration, and more dialogue. Otherwise, very much enjoyed it.
The original was gut wrenching but left me feeling empty. So I had to rerate this story with a 5 star instead of a 3. I don't like a universe without Katie.
I have read the entire series. It was very well written. I would have enjoyed more, but am happy with what you gave us. I read both endings and enjoyed them both in their own ways.
I don't like this ending either, but, for me, it was better that the original
Ooooooooo!!!!!! You said "retarded"! And someone called you out for it!!?? FUCK THAT NOISE...I AM TIRED OF MODERN-DAY POLITICAL CORRECTNESS, and being over-concerned with 'what might affect our kid's...minegrew up hearing 'politically-incorrect' terminology, will still use it now, at times...so JUST SHUT THE F___ UP, and take your whining somewhere else!
I do not feel you have "ground an axe" against any governmental agency or whatever...you wrote a passionate love story, which is my #1 FAVORITE of all time...
Thanks for the story, and I wish you health, happiness, and 💘 LOVE in your life!!
Yyyyaaaayyyy!!!!
Great story, glad I stumbled into it. In couldn't stop reading it. Lost some sleep reading, but it was worth it.
Excellent story overall that it could have been movie worthy. But as written the ending not in charcter with the rest of the story. 4-6 chapters of resolving the fight, going through college and starting a career would greatly help in tying the story to the conclusion. As it is the story has a sloppy finish and not in a good way.
Yeah, that ending sucked donkey dicks....
It doesn't even feel like it was written by the same person who wrote the wonderful upper peninsula stuff.
Rating dropped to a ONE. Thanks for ruining a really good love story just because you have some kind of axe to grind politically.
I have a problem with one word you used "retarded". This word is out of use for modern intelligent kids.
Other than that I loved the story. On to the next one!