All Comments on '3 The Power of Avalon'

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AnarchiaAnarchiaover 11 years ago

very vivid writing, fast paced. i liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Damnation, that was hot! I wish it was longer, but I can't figger how. Just do more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I was uncertain about the brother being part of the action, but it worked well in the end. Now that all three sibs have crossed the "fun & games" line, what's next...parents or the traveling husband? Write on!

MegamuffinMegamuffinalmost 7 years ago
So good

This series just keeps getting better.

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