All Comments on '30 Hours'

by Shorthairdontcare

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 8 years ago
pretty good

I hope there is more to this story, I really like it

KumquatMayKumquatMayabout 8 years ago
Brilliant.

This story is wonderful - obviously the 4th part of a larger work. I've read your other 3 stories & they fit together perfectly. Your characters are lovely, a bit broken & a bit selfish but real & endearing. They're likeable, relatable.

Thanks for this exceptional stoey. You write good stuff, my friend & do it skillfully. Thank you very much. You are a pleasure to read. 5 well deserved stars.

Taylor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

This story was awesome! Wish they'd end up together as partners and go home to each other and be able to be in public as lovers :)

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 8 years ago

Wow! Such a hot juicy story and like that burger analogy, I would love to trade places, have my juices licked and punanny eaten up just like these characters. Shorthairdontcare, good job!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
4 stories

I love these stories. More please.

cumbaby4ucumbaby4uover 7 years ago
Perfect!

I love to be teased and you have mastered the art.

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