All Comments on '30 is the New 20 Ch. 01'

by frozenhero1

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
ummmm

Dont you have like, oh i dont know...another fucking story to finish before starting ANOTHER new story...like seriously dude what the fuck

Lonely_readerLonely_readerabout 8 years ago
Very good

Entertaining, well written and good sex. Is there possibly more to ask about?

I'm hoping to find out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good Story

Will there be a continuance? Will she get on the pill or get pregnant?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Embarrassed to be one of these f€£¥*ng Anonymous commenters

I guess I should dig up my Literotica sign-in info, so I didn't appear allied with some of the inane — and especially idiotic brain-dead — anonymous comments. At any rate, a fine read. Well crafted, great character development, and fun. Thank-you.

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999about 8 years ago
Good story and decent characters

Very happy to see you back in action. I'm not sure I will be following this story due to the female perspective but best wishes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
We're all hanging by out tender parts!!!!!

Great story! Hilarious in a lot of parts!!!

Please continue! Tell us she gets to take him, shit go for broke, IN UNIFORM, to Richard's wedding!!!!

I just imagine some form of her saying to Richard (Dick?) that she's so satisfied and he's enough of a man that she hasn't even had the energy to CONSIDER straying. Hell she is more concerned with not walking bow legged!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow, I'm intrigued

Not bad, not bad at all keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Scene Construction and Writing.

I am really awed by the scene construction . It felt in the grey areas of romatic and erotic. Keep it going.

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