by Member389
I can't tell you the number of times I have read this. Thank you! I all good stories you never want it to end, think about extending it like Kiss Me Kate
A good arc on these two chapters, you built it up and capped it nicely. I liked her having to cut her vacation short, it brought their relationship (and the story) to a point, rather than just idling in fun but gratuitous sexy times for another few days.
If you do continue the story, I feel like Chapters 1 and 2 were book 1, and future chapters will be the sequel, their own self-contained story arc.
To eisteddfa62 I don't see that. Ch. 1 and Ch. 2 are showing up differently for me. As to a chapter 3 that may be in the works. I have several other stories begging to be written too. We will see.
There is a fault somewhere in the posting, chapter 1 and 2 are the same !!!!!!, is there a chapter 3.
Love it! I trust there’s going to more...
“Kiss Me Cate” is one of the best on the site. This has the makings to be just as wonderful.
Any chance a 3rd chapter in this series is available? Want some closure!
An amazing story. At first it still seemed a story of erotic couples, but it was moving forward like a real romance. I could not say that a sequel is needed, this ending is so open that it leaves everything to the reader's imagination.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Another great story. Nice twist at the end. As for the length of the story, I enjoy the longer stories.
Loved this just like your other work. Does feel like it's unfinished though. Hopefully there'll be another chapter to follow.
Couple of things: 1) please get an editor. Quite a few confusing things and errors that an editor could have helped with (I'm happy to help); and 2) you have far too many wiggling eyebrows in your stories ;)
Keep up the good work.
Nicely done. Let someone else imagine what happened next.
sex, a little too little character development and romance. And you kinda left it hanging.
I never saw what he saw in her beyond the obvious.
Excellent story but it is a shame to leave it hanging.
I know it is hard to pickup after a long time but I'll bet you have a draft of the ending. Please finish and post it.
how about one more stories about what happened on returning to Boston. It is a great story so why not go on with it.
Is the best word I can come up with. Very nice story, well written. Thanks.