All Comments on '30 Minutes'

I was really enjoying the story but the end was no up to snuff. Should have

used something really POPPING or a crescendo at the end. Keep on writing

and maybe wait to submit a story. I personally like to wait a few days and re read my work, I think you have it in your head, just need to get it to the paper

Max static friction is greater than sliding

That is a rape story.

+ this macho fantasy of "girls aren't good at vidéo games, the only thing they are good at is sucking Dick and having pain" is lame

I enjoyed the epilogue

4 stars he used lube and didnt fotce her for atm

"He grabbed her by the hips, and heaved her down the full way.He slowly withdrew from her sphincter, and then suddenly slammed his way back inside. Alice howled in pain."

just what kind of bf make his gf first anal that painful

why was the need of making her anal cherry popped that painful

he could have been gentle atleast her first time

she should leave him and throw hiss money on his face

but no coz in all male fantasies always women come from breaking of theur asshole no?

and then she starts to love him more no and let him do anything ?

get real dude

why did he asked her if she is okay earlier if only he wanted her first anal to be super painful whats the point sadist bastard