by MrsKaykay
you qualified this as a 'dream'...which meets the suspension of reality criteria. You write well and the concept was imaginative. Thanks for a five-star read. Keep at it and be sure and check out some of the other high score authors available on this site. Character development is a good thing. Take care...and have a great weekend!
I like it until I read that she was left in a CAGE!!! So no stars from me. I would have loved it if he had treated her as a human being.
Thank you for writing this story. I like how caring he is to keep his slave safe and satisfied. It's what I crave. -stef
Good bye you asshole. You promised you'd not share me and it's practically the first thing you do. You lose. I'm leaving. Do not come after or attempt to get me back. I don't want this life. You have no respect for me.