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by TheMadSonneteer

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Jaydean409Jaydean40910 months ago

Hot!!!! Well done!!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Clever premise.

But sex ia all to automatic. Too mechanical.

Needs much more in the way of foreplay/preliminaries.

Needs more boob involvement/action. Maybe a titty fuck. Maybe suggested by her.

Even anal was rushed. Why no lube? Why no plying with her asshole, teasing and fingering it? Maybe some analingus to lube it?

Wasn't happy with the ending.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Unfortunately, "The pistol thundered again.", that puts Emily/Quinn in the frame for murder,

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nice twist, thank you. Enjoyed it.

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