All Comments on '4 Moms 4 Aidan Ch. 11'

Hope to read in the next and final chapter that Aidan was killed in a horrible, single car accident.

This is a fantasy of many young men and probably girls also . A horney teen alway wants to fuck his friends hot mom , a teacher, a married person or a superior at work . I know a good amount who have had the luxury to do these . In my early 20s i fucked a woman only once but was at least 20 years older. Her kid was a few years younger and it was just a chance meeting and got very lucky . Being young and able to keep going after I shot a quick load in her mouth I was able to take my time on her pussy and ass. She was still married but in her way to divorce. I was very vocal during bring up hubby and son which it seemed to make her even more wild. We dressed and she begged me not to tell anyone, which I never have told a soul, I alway got the extra warm hellos and a few cheap feels over the years but it only happened that one time. One time about 3 months later she was behind me in a crowed elevator with her family and a bunch of other people so no one could see my hand behind me as I rubbed her pussy for about two minutes because we stopped on most floors . I saw her at a store a few days later and she was laughing telling me how her soon to be ex was so thrown off by her sexual attack on him that night. We did talk one time on the phone while she played with her self and me trying to convince her for one more time but as hot as it was she felt real bad because her son was so close to my age and he would be destroyed if it got out. I think this story needs a little verbal talk down while fucking about his friends , their kids. This woman remarried a 1 1/2 later. She said her first hubby was her first, me that one time and now her new hubby which many years later she is still with. Whoever is lucky enough to have this experience I'm sure would agree how awesome it is to have this experience. To fuck some hot married mom who you know the hubby and kids in the ass is so dominating and awesome 23

Bad teacher is yor best work This one comes second. Nice job.

Cant wait to see more of your work.

Just finished reading all the chapters.

Brilliant stuff. Incredibly erotic and exciting.

Love your work. Please make more!

Glad the creepy rapist story is over.

This is a far fetched tale at best. This would never happen like this. Aidan is a complete ass. (Or should I say "dick").

Since the pregnancies are locked in, why not fast forward a bit into the future and have Aidan make a run through the sisters? IIRC, most of his friends have sisters, but they were under 18. So get them to 18. He could start in on them, and maybe have the moms find out and acquiesce (as they always do). No need to knock them up, just to really put the Aidan stamp on the families.

Not a fan of the painful anal. I know the character is expressing dominance but that's utter bullshit. You can be dominant and pleasure your lovers at the same time.

If so, looking forward to it. If not, what is next?

Really a very good story. The mystery part comes in when he was taking Grace Cass, and his last pass . Where he get the lube from to well lubricate his dick. We're did he get the lube from if he was naked??

Really want to see Aidan work his way through the sisters. This would be a complete takeover of the families, and would put the finishing touches on the saga of Aidan. Just keep the reluctance factor high, no pushovers.

Nice Ending. But now with Aidan talking about moving Closer after the first year of College. Maybe You Could write Aidan the College Years. and why stop with 4 when he can Add More.

I cant recall the last time I laughed so hysterically!

The - sadistic, narcisisstic, young horny man possessing no moral compass and exploiting his " lovers" was so rich and dripping with irony! Based on the comments of other readers, they have zero depth or comprehension. I enjoyed it so much! You have a gift! Please bestow more of your blessings on us with more of your writing!

Greatly appreciat your talent and much enjoyed!

please continue both segments of the 4 months and the hot teacher. ignore the negatve comments. u r defintely among the best on loterotica.please carry on.

Congratulations - stroke material for 16yr olds!

I know u started a new series but plz continue this one n the teach story as well.

i hope not, i read the complete story in one go and would love to see it continue.

Coming back doing the wife's and leaving the "cuck's" to take care of the diaper's. While the wife goes to see her lover Aidan.

Plz continue this series as well as the teacher

I think that perhaps English is not your primary language.

Your English Grammar is terrible and a good proof reader would really help.

In need of an epilogue.

I would really like to see the 4 Milfs and Aidan handle the 4 new kids in their lives. And if possible see how their curent relationships with their husbands take a turn for either thr better or the worse.

So like I said, in need of an epilogue... Pretty please?

This story needs to continue. What happens to the group and their husbands

once the babies are born and Aiden comes back from college

Great story. As many others have stated, I hope you continue this story. Looking forward to more of your work.

please continue this story

Why can't you get a proof reader?

Golly would I be overjoyed if for some miracle I found out the baby wasn’t mine and I could leave my skank for greener pastures and not feel a drop of remorse , just an overwhelming sense of freedom !!!

This is one of the best stories put there. Please write another.

Incredibly hot and well written - love the way you build it up - please continue - there is scope for more here

Not sure that our hero is not a complete arsehole.

He wants the conquests and disrespects the Ladies that brought him up as well as pissing all over their husbands and his own best friends

Yeah, I'll bet all four husbands were really understanding. This is the most ridiculous crap ever.

Well after the first chapter, I was dubious. However you pulled this together.

In anything remotely like real life, the four husband's realize they were lied to, do DNA checks, see they are not the father, but the biological father is the same for all four, they all file, except maybe the weakest, sappiest husband, and then they do some investigating and realize Aidan is one of several choices to test for court ordered DNA. They bide their time, and three years later, Aidan is dead and buried in landfill somewhere. Hot sex scenes but total suspension of disbelief is required to solve the crapola of the last chapters.

Excellent story, start to finish. Yes, Aiden seems an entitled jerk, but je seemed to have some redeeming qualities at the end. One note, it seemed redundant to constantly be reminding that they were married. Certainly in the heatvof passion, but not in the descriptions. Remind the women of their fall, but not constantly the reader. Great work though.