by bb1212
This chick is just plain weird! Nineteen years? Great sex BOTH times! Enough for her to come 5000 miles to let him throw one into her own daughter, and then fly away? Life is just too short for this kind of bizarre nonsense. After declaring my love, if she told me look her up in another "nineteen" years I'd tell her to not fucking bother!
I do think it is a tall order, 2x 19 years, but not impossible, for a story anyway...
But please add a 03 chapter too.
John
nothing wrong with these stories being a bit far fetched, after all this is fantasy. BUT...to ask a man to wait a second 19 years for her to come back is just too far fetched. in his position i'd tell her either to stay or not bother to return. AND, i'd make sure i was nowhere to be found at about the time of the 3rd visit to emphasise the point.
I still like it, and ridicule Anonymous, who would say take a hike Sheila!
It is a great idea, and a good story, some explanations in Ch 3, but a lot left for Ch 4!
Go on!
John
Nice story. I liked him taking the daughter's virginity @ the end, too. That was pretty special! VBut to wat another 19 years to see them again! How long does this guy's libido have? Holy cow!
What a great story. Talk about love, pain and the whole damn
unfairness of life. This angel comes into his life, takes a great big grip on his heart and dissappears for years. The promised return happens and poor old David is given another taste of heaven plus a surprise extra, only to have them both
fly off into the wild blue yonder. Poor guy, I feel so sorry for him. Wish it could have been me.....
vaseline and a condom???? unless you are planning a sequel with another daughter, this is just plain dumb.
...with 5,000 miles. I Googled it. Dallas (about 190 north of Austin) to Adelaide is 9,000 miles. One airline ticket price listed was $2,000.
She does not call before spending that kind of money??? She/they are on a tight one-day-allowed schedule. What if he was out of town that day? Wasted....
Paul in Oklahoma