by abbo27
It has all the elements a wanton slut/whore that is caught like a deer in the headlights.
You have a great start! Would be nice to see this finished.
The combination of action and the submissive's point-of-view improves this concept considerably. Keep this up and Chapter 7 should be an award winner.
What would make this better is that Mark finds out and turns the tables on both of them.....consequences and revenge would complete this story!