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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good premise.

But the sex was too quick. No buildup with any kind of foreplay. No dialog about what she intended to do to him. Would he like that? No playing with his cock and balls for a while before she begn to suck.

He says nothing until "I'm cumming". Why?

Sex? Yes. Erotic? Not particularly.

Three stars.

Lnwent2kckLnwent2kckover 2 years ago

Had almost the same thing happen to me in a factory I worked at way back in 1982. She had a great set of titts to, not really anything to write home about though.

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