by SoftlyPressingOnward
I don't really get it to be honest.... All that build up for a marriage proposal? I thought the final test would be epic, but it was nothing at all. What were they worried about? It's sweet and all, but I felt kind of cheated. Keep writing as you have obvious skill, but next time, let the climax be a little bit more satisfying.
Thank you for reading. I absolutely agree, it can't end here. I hope you like juicy epilogues!
Well done and hoping for more and more about how they feel for each other.
No epilogue? Sorry but this so called finale doesn't quite cut the mustard. It's been 6 years, so I guess you just flaked out and left, eh? Sometimes I wish the Site manger for Literotica could somehow dispose of the hundreds, if not thousands, of unfinished storylines on this page. Sorry for being rude, but it is kind of irritating.