All Comments on '5 Tests Pt. 04'

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Kj1962Kj1962almost 8 years ago
great where is last test?

where is test 5?????????

SoftlyPressingOnwardSoftlyPressingOnwardalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Month Break

thanks to the hard working people on the site who fixed this link. Just a heads up, it'll be a month before the final part of this story is released because I just started med school and will be working on it in my off hours. Thanks for your patience!

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 8 years ago
One Plus Two!

Nate Has Kim and Mary Right Where He Wants Them! Husband Wife and Sister Toy! That is My Guess and Hope! Great Writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I thought this would be test five.

Test four was meeting Kim's family, right? So test five was satisfying her sister. In essence this is test six coming up. Also, if Kim doesn't get comeuppance for ambushing him with tests then the story will fall flat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I was mistaken.

Re-reading chapter 3, I see he was chanting "test 4" but she did not say whether or not meeting her parents was or not. She did say that he passed test 4 in this chapter. However, he had to pass extra tests from her sister so I imagine he will take it out on her when he passes test 5. Or if he doesn't, then he's better off without. People shouldn't have conditions on relationships beyond mutual respect and compatibility.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Med School & Stories

Hoping med school studies aren't overwhelming and you still find time to write. Please finish this if you can but please give an update if your time frame has been modified. Very fine writing!

SoftlyPressingOnwardSoftlyPressingOnwardover 7 years agoAuthor
Update

This story's final chapter is about half done, which makes me hopeful I can drop it mid-September if my schedule allows. Thanks for your patience!

RunsAmokRunsAmokover 7 years ago
This Made Me Laugh So Hard

" 'Oh, so you don't think it's 'fairytale bullshit' anymore?' Kim sassed.

So it's probably not the cum-tasting (test). "

Instant hilarity.

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