All Comments on '5-Year Plan'

by HarryBoyles

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LenardSpencerLenardSpencerabout 2 years ago

Excellent. Your much improved writing style suited the main character. Great storyline, though a tad weird but that just makes the story "stand out" from others. Differentiation makes all the difference. Thanks for the story, it was a good read. Cheers.

AgroundagainAgroundagainover 1 year ago

Smiled the whole way through it. Delightful! The "cutest" story I've read on the site.

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

I didn't like it. A bit too strange for me especially the abrupt ending.

RanDog025RanDog0253 months ago

This cracked me up pretty good, your words! "She was augmenting her income by witnessing. She got HUGE tips" lol. Good story, very enjoyable. Didn't like editing the dot dot dots, they ruin the story when you listen to it in Text Aloud. % BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks.

Pinto931Pinto93118 days ago

Good romance story spoiled by a quick disappointing ending. The whole cage thing was ridiculous.

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