by KhrayziSkitz
I'm from an island way to the north and this story made me crack up! Good job with some of your spelling of the dialect btw. Everytime I hear any lryics with 6:30 in them I'll think of this. Lol
This was a very sexy read.
I must say, you did quite well with throwing in the local drink, lingo and music. Well done. I was just in Barbados a week ago and already I want to go back :)
Being a white guy who never had the opportunity to make love to a black woman, well, it's nice to read your description here. You have a great way of making this sound real and not so contrived like many writers whose characters instantly leap into bed.
LOL. Have you been to Barbados? Because I have and your descriptions were pretty spot on, accept for the boots and being able to tour the entire island in just 2 hours. I love these travel sex stories that incorporate a bit of local culture. I just wish there would've been better build up to the sex. She jumped into bed with him rather quickly, but still a good read. This story brought back some memories. It's nice to see a girl write this kind of story.
I agree, Bajan girls are sexy.
I also submitted a story about a Bajan girl last night, but it hasn't been published yet.
I've also noticed the girls there don't really pay attention to white guys, but I actually had a local guy offer me a girl, and I used that as a premise to my story. HAHA
You did A LOT better with the local dialect than I did. LOL