All Comments on '6:30 Is the Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Omg do a second lust filled chapter please

BenLongBenLongover 10 years ago
Loved it!

And loved what it did to me!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
Hot Damn

That was so fuckin hot

islandqtislandqtover 10 years ago
lol!,

I'm from an island way to the north and this story made me crack up! Good job with some of your spelling of the dialect btw. Everytime I hear any lryics with 6:30 in them I'll think of this. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
island gal

This was a very sexy read.

I must say, you did quite well with throwing in the local drink, lingo and music. Well done. I was just in Barbados a week ago and already I want to go back :)

writerjabwriterjababout 10 years ago
Loved it

Being a white guy who never had the opportunity to make love to a black woman, well, it's nice to read your description here. You have a great way of making this sound real and not so contrived like many writers whose characters instantly leap into bed.

StopokochacStopokochacalmost 6 years ago
Barbados

LOL. Have you been to Barbados? Because I have and your descriptions were pretty spot on, accept for the boots and being able to tour the entire island in just 2 hours. I love these travel sex stories that incorporate a bit of local culture. I just wish there would've been better build up to the sex. She jumped into bed with him rather quickly, but still a good read. This story brought back some memories. It's nice to see a girl write this kind of story.

I agree, Bajan girls are sexy.

I also submitted a story about a Bajan girl last night, but it hasn't been published yet.

I've also noticed the girls there don't really pay attention to white guys, but I actually had a local guy offer me a girl, and I used that as a premise to my story. HAHA

You did A LOT better with the local dialect than I did. LOL

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